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   Nigel
   Member

   SCENE 1 - FIRST DAY ON THE FORENSIC INVESTIGATION TEAM FOR THE BOYS

   Jules: Hey Nige you ready, first day and all that can't be late!

   Nige: Yeah just a minute just checking to see if the tv has accidently floated under the bed he says checking for the 24th time under his bed of their shared apartment. Ready!

   Jules: Hey do you think if I say hello and shake the Governer's hand it will be ok or do you think that's too much? Is it bad of me? Will I go to hell?

   Nige: Shut up a minute, I'm checking for aliens under the car!

   Wed May 5 2010 18:23:35 #
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   Nigel
   Member

   SCENE 2 - LUNCHTIME

   Jules: Hey Nige let's go to subway before we get out first case. Induction was boring wasnt it?

   Nige: Let's order I'm really hungry after that night out.

   Jules: I've got an idea let's order the double sandwich and half it instead of the meal deal then we'll buy the drinks separate and buy one cookie for the sake of it. It'll be much cheaper than the advertised meal deal.

   Nige: You're paying.

   Nige and Jules place an order and start eating. Jules then has a sense of realisation.

   Jules: I've paid too much.

   Nige: Pass me the rubbish I have to fold it into a square and place it gently into the bin.

   Wed May 5 2010 18:27:25 #
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   Nigel
   Member

   SCENE 2 - LUNCHTIME

   Jules: Hey Nige let's go to subway before we get out first case. Induction was boring wasnt it?

   Nige: Let's order I'm really hungry after that night out.

   Jules: I've got an idea let's order the double sandwich and half it instead of the meal deal then we'll buy the drinks separate and buy one cookie for the sake of it. It'll be much cheaper than the advertised meal deal.

   Nige: You're paying.

   Nige and Jules place an order and start eating. Jules then has a sense of realisation.

   Jules: I've paid too much.

   Nige: Pass me the rubbish I have to fold it into a square and place it gently into the bin.

   Wed May 5 2010 18:28:07 #
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   Nigel
   Member

   SCENE 3 - FIRST CASE AT THE STRIP CLUB

   The Boss: Nige, Jules there's some drug dealing going on at the strip club I want you to go there and investigate. Don't let me down.

   Nige and Jules enter the strip club.

   Two girls walk up to them and offer a lap dance.

   Nige: Jules let's do it, we have to look inconspicous.

   Jule's: Ok. Hey the blonde one has a nipple pierced. She's really hot but only one nipple is pierced. I can't cope with the lack of symmetry I'm going to get a dance from the larger girl instead. She might have rolls of fat but she's symmetrical.

   Dancer 1: Nige, how come you're not enjoying my dance?

   Nige: I'm sorry I cant concentrate on your boobs right now. I think I've left the iron on and I may have dropped something under the table, under the stairs and in the cloak room.

   While Jules and Nige have their awkward dances the drug dealers get away.

   Wed May 5 2010 18:31:18 #
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   Truddles
   Member

   I'm looking forward to scene 4

   Wed May 5 2010 18:50:52 #
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   Unregistered

   Write more! I keep checking for it! It' so funny

   Thu May 27 2010 11:52:19 #
7. 

   Nigel
   Member

   Hi,

   The next episode of OCD Miami is in the Coffee area however it's not great as it's rushed.

   Nigel.

   Sat May 29 2010 18:45:19 #

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